AcaDemic Writing Task 1 – Electricity Use in England
Do task 1 without looking at the student answer (the second document).
After you have finished you can compare your answer to this student answer.
These are our corrections for the student answer above.
The highlighted phrases in the IELTS band descriptors match features of the student answer.
How does your own answer compare? Is it better organised? Do you have a better range of cohesive devices, vocabulary and grammar?