In the IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 you need to be comfortable writing about statistics and trends in data. If you can't do this effectively, your Task Achievement will be low. People often struggle to find the right vocabulary to accurately describe trends in data so we thought we'd help you with this post.
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Verbs and Nouns
It will boost your vocabulary band score if you use both verb and noun phrases to describe statistics. so first of all let's have a look at some examples of vocabulary you could use.
In order to give more precise information about trends and statistics we can use adjectives to modify nouns and adverbs to modify verbs.
For example, ‘there was a dramatic increase in the number of cars sold between 2001 and 2003’.
Notice the form of the sentence ‘There was… (noun phrase) in…’ – this is a good way to start the sentence – later on we’ll practice this type of sentence.
For example, 'there was a gradual rise in the number of electric cars sold over the period'.
For example, 'sales of cars increased dramatically between 2001 and 2003’.
For example, ‘sales of motorbikes declined slowly through the year’.
Watch out for the following common mistakes that people make.
Practice Task 1
Look at the following sentences. Some are correct whilst others contain mistakes. Can you tell which ones are wrong and why?
There was a slight rise in the cost of fuel at the beginning of winter.
The wrong form of the verb ‘rise’ is used.
‘In October the number of tourists plummeted’ .
‘There was a plummet in the number of tourists in October’.
There was a huge increase in the production of tea in the 19th century.
The article ‘a’ should be used before ‘huge increase’.
Next year it is projected that the numbers of people using social media will fall gradually.
The adverb ‘gradually’ should be used to describe the verb ‘fall’
Practice Task 2
The following sentences contain verb phrases to describe statistics. Rewrite them with noun phrases.
For example – The number rose. / There was a rise in the number.
There was a surge in the price of cat food from $1.50 to $2.00 per can in late 2010.
There was a steady drop in the price of oil towards the end of the decade.
There was a steady number of people moving to the city during the period.
There was a reduction in subsidies by the government and a wild fluctuation in prices for the rest of the year.
There was a dramatic increase in the percentage of people travelling to work by bus from 11% to 23% while there was a slight drop in the percentage of people using cars to 18%.
Practice Task 3
The graph below shows the price of apples and oranges between 1999 and 2003. Write a short report about the change in the price of apples and oranges shown in the graph. Make sure you use both verb and noun phrases in your description. When you have finished check the IELTSTutors example found below the graph.
The graph shows the price of Apples and Oranges per Kilo over a 4-year period from 1999 to 2003. Despite the price fluctuating quite a lot, apples finished the period costing much more than at the beginning, while oranges finished just a little more expensive than their initial price.
In 1999 apples cost $5 per kilo, however, in the following year there was a drastic decrease in the price to only $1, the lowest price for apples over the whole period. Between 2000 and 2002 the price recovered to an extent, climbing from $1 to $3. In the last year of the period there was a sharp increase in the cost to $7, $2 more than at the start of the period.
On the other hand, the price of oranges more or less followed the opposite trend. The price was low in 1999 at only $2. However, the following year it rose impressively to $5. Between 2000 and 2001 there was a steady increase in the cost to $6. This was the highest price that oranges achieved over the whole period. The following year the cost declined sharply to $3 and in the final year oranges lost another 50 cents in value to finish the period at $2.50.
Let’s look at some tips for how to achieve a good band score for Academic Writing Task 2. If you have any questions or any good tips you want to share please write them in the comments section below.
Below is a typical IELTS task 2 essay question. Read it, then look at our tips.
A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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