First review what you know about complex noun phrases with this previous post.
In this lesson we will look at an IELTS Speaking Test part 2 task and study two similar answers.
One answer doesn't use complex noun phrases so there is a lot of repetition. This lowers the candidate's band score.
The second answer is a higher band response because it uses complex noun phrases to reduce repetition.
Read the IELTS Speaking Part 2 Question Topic below.
Describe a journey you have been on.
You should say:
|I’m going to tell you about a long journey which I went on last year. I took a trip 1) Kochi in Kerala to Margao in Goa in southern India. My girlfriend and I cycled the 800km route. We had great 2) sea to the west and the mountains to the east along the whole way.|
|I love southern India as there are lots of interesting things to see there. In one place we saw ancient temples 3) of pilgrims 4) came from all over India. In another area we cycled through isolated hills 5) in dense jungle. We saw monkeys and heard wild birds calling. Local people informed us that leopards and big snakes live in the jungle there. We saw a snake 6) the side of the road but it was quite small.|
|We ate lots of delicious 7) by local people. Most people 8) along the way were very friendly. We were tired by the time we got to the end of our journey. The last place we stayed was on a beautiful 9) sparkling water and swaying coconut trees. It was one of the best journeys I have ever been on and someday I would love to go back.|
We hope you can see how using complex noun phrases can improve your English. Try them out yourself by writing out your response to this question in around 150 words. Post it into the comments section below for some free feedback.
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Quiz | Cause and Effect Prepositions
Choose the correct preposition
If you want more practice, see our full Cause and Effect Grammar lesson.
We also have a lesson to help you identify cause and effect language in academic reading texts.
Go through the lessons in the links above if you need to remind yourself about the grammar of participle clauses.
|1.||The man next door is very friendly.|
|2.||The old apartment block, in by only a few families, is due to be demolished next year.|
|3.||Economic problems by corruption and a lack of investment are likely to remain divisive.|
|4.||a major protest, the government raised fuel prices.|
|5.||Harmful emissions from the burning of fossil fuels the environment is one of the major problems we face today.|
|6.||to the point of being classified dead 60 years ago, the river Thames in England is now full of life again.|
|7.||Diabetes, by the health service as one of their biggest expenditures in terms of medication, is easily avoided if a person has a healthy lifestyle.|
|8.||Many people themselves as speakers of minority languages feel more should be done to protect their linguistic heritage.|
|1.||Students who rely on digital technology too much often struggle in exams.|
|Students digital technology too much often struggle in exams.|
|2.||The original copy of the book, which was illustrated by a famous illustrator, is worth a lot of money today.|
|The original copy of the book, a famous illustrator, is worth a lot of money today.|
|3.||Businesses which prioritize the happiness and well-being of their employees are likely to see their employees work harder.|
|Businesses the happiness and well-being of their employees are likely to see their employees work harder.|
|4.||The statistics were analyzed by the government. The statistics were used to inform the new policy.|
|, the statistics were used to inform the new policy.|
|5.||The family who will fund the new building want their name over the door.|
|The family the new building want their name over the door.|
|6.||The American government prohibited alcohol in the 1920’s. The American government did nothing more than force people to break the law.|
|in the 1920’s, the American government did nothing more than force people to break the law.|
|7.||The people who invested in cryptocurrencies in the early days made a lot of money.|
|The people cryptocurrencies in the early days made a lot of money.|
|8.||Jason and the Argonauts sought after the golden fleece which was a mythical sheep’s skin.|
|by Jason and the Argonauts, the golden fleece was a mythical sheep’s skin.|
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About The IELTS Test
Academic Writing Task 1
Academic Writing Task 2
Band 7 Grammar
Cause And Effect
Coherence And Cohesion
Complete The Notes
Complete The Table
Data And Figures
Frequently Asked Questions
General Training Reading
General Writing Task 1
General Writing Task 2
Grammatical Range And Accuracy
Listening Section 1
Listening Section 2
Listening Section 3
Listening Section 4
Problem Solution Essay
Speaking Part 1
Speaking Part 2
Speaking Part 3
True / False / Not Given